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The
Declaration of Independence stands with Lincoln's
Second Inaugural Address as one of the noblest of
America's official documents. In 1822, John Adams
wrote a letter to Timothy Pickering responding to
Pickering's questions about the writing of the
Declaration of Independence. Adams' letters were
published in 1850:
"You inquire why
so young a man as Mr. Jefferson was placed at the
head of the committee for preparing a Declaration of
Independence? I answer: It was the Frankfort advice,
to place Virginia at the head of everything. Mr.
Richard Henry Lee might be gone to Virginia, to his
sick family, for aught I know, but that was not the
reason of Mr. Jefferson's appointment. There were
three committees appointed at the same time, one for
the Declaration of Independence, another for
preparing articles of confederation, and another for
preparing a treaty to be proposed to France. Mr. Lee
was chosen for the Committee of Confederation, and
it was not thought convenient that the same person
should be upon both. Mr. Jefferson came into
Congress in June, 1775, and brought with him a
reputation for literature, science, and a happy
talent of composition. Writings of his were handed
about, remarkable for the peculiar felicity of
expression. Though a silent member in Congress, he
was so prompt, frank, explicit, and decisive upon
committees and in conversation - not even Samuel
Adams was more so - that he soon seized upon my
heart; and upon this occasion I gave him my vote,
and did all in my power to procure the votes of
others. I think he had one more vote than any other,
and that placed him at the head of the committee. I
had the next highest number, and that placed me the
second. The committee met, discussed the subject,
and then appointed Mr. Jefferson and me to make the
draft, I suppose because we were the two first on
the list.
The subcommittee met.
Jefferson proposed to me to make the draft. I said,
'I will not,' 'You should do it.' 'Oh! no.' 'Why
will you not? You ought to do it.' 'I will not.'
'Why?' 'Reasons enough.' 'What can be your reasons?'
'Reason first, you are a Virginian, and a Virginian
ought to appear at the head of this business. Reason
second, I am obnoxious, suspected, and unpopular.
You are very much otherwise. Reason third, you can
write ten times better than I can.' 'Well,' said
Jefferson, 'if you are decided, I will do as well as
I can.' 'Very well. When you have drawn it up, we
will have a meeting.'
A meeting we
accordingly had, and conned the paper over. I was
delighted with its high tone and the flights of
oratory with which it abounded, especially that
concerning Negro slavery, which, though I knew his
Southern brethren would never suffer to pass in
Congress, I certainly never would oppose. There were
other expressions which I would not have inserted if
I had drawn it up, particularly that which called
the King tyrant. I thought this too personal, for I
never believed George to be a tyrant in disposition
and in nature; I always believed him to be deceived
by his courtiers on both sides of the Atlantic, and
in his official capacity, only, cruel. I thought the
expression too passionate, and too much like
scolding, for so grave and solemn a document; but as
Franklin and Sherman were to inspect it afterwards,
I thought it would not become me to strike it out. I
consented to report it, and do not now remember that
I made or suggested a single alteration.
We reported it to the
committee of five. It was read, and I do not
remember that Franklin or Sherman criticized
anything. We were all in haste. Congress was
impatient, and the instrument was reported, as I
believe, in Jefferson's handwriting, as he first
drew it. Congress cut off about a quarter of it, as
I expected they would; but they obliterated some of
the best of it, and left all that was exceptionable,
if anything in it was. I have long wondered that the
original draft had not been published. I suppose the
reason is the vehement philippic against Negro
slavery.
As you justly
observe, there is not an idea in it but what had
been hackneyed in Congress for two years before. The
substance of it is contained in the declaration of
rights and the violation of those rights in the
Journals of Congress in 1774. Indeed, the essence of
it is contained in a pamphlet, voted and printed by
the town of Boston, before the first Congress met,
composed by James Otis, as I suppose, in one of his
lucid intervals, and pruned and polished by Samuel
Adams."
References:
Adams, John (Charles Francis Adams
ed.), The Works of John Adams, vol II, The Diary
(1850) reprinted in Commager, H.S. and Nevins, A.,
The Heritage of America (1939); Maier Pauline,
American Scripture: Making the Declaration of
Independence (1997).
Adapted From: "Writing the Declaration of
Independence, 1776," EyeWitness to History,
www.eyewitnesstohistory.com (1999).
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